Monday, March 31, 2008

My English Blog!!

It's been a long time since I dreamed of having my own blog. However, the lack of motivation has long been my barrier. The reason is that it is so embarrassing if I lose my passion to keep writing. Now, I have the opportunity to have my blog in English. Therefore, I can share my emotion and colorful college life in my blog. Sometimes I will also share some great songs I heard on the Internet or in the choir. Tomorrow we have a chemical analysis midterm exam, so now I have to go to study.

Sunday, March 30, 2008

Comparison of two ads




Outline:
Topic Sentence: The two ads have same ways and different ways to achieve the advertising effect.
Main point A: the left picture
Evidence:
1. using unreasonable effect to make expression (same)
2. point at the stability (different)
3. way of presenting (different)
Main point B: the right picture
Evidence:
1. using unreasonable effect to make expression (same)
2. point at the speed and efficiency (different)
3. way of presenting (different)
Concluding sentence: Every advertisement have the same purpose--- to make impression on consumers, but they will be presented by unlimited ways, that is why the advertisements are always attractive.
Comparison of two ads
The two ads have same ways and different ways to achieve the advertising effect. We can look at them one by one.
From the first picture, we can see a box of poker was sent to the destination barely moved. It seems very unreasonable in the real life, but it does make a deep impression on our mind and successfully achieve the effect to advertise. On the other hand, this advertisement use a kind of positive and direct way to brag about its stability.
From the other picture, we can see a fire engine go out from a Fedex truck to put out the fire. Also, it seems impossible to happen. How could a fire engine in a Fedex truck? How could a delivery service faster than fire fighter? They also spared no effort bragging about the speed and efficiency. However, it does make everyone realize what they want to express and reach the purpose of advertising. Regarding the ways of presenting, different from the straight forward way of advertising, picture B uses a kind of ironic way to give a sharp comparison of lack of efficiency fire engine and indirectly make people realize the speed that the delivery service have.
Every advertisement have the same purpose--- to make impression on consumers, but they will be presented by unlimited ways, that is why the advertisements are always attractive.

Thursday, March 27, 2008

Assignment of Refrences----Avian Flu

CBC News website. (2008). Retrieved March 30, 2008 from http://www.cbc.ca/news/background/avianflu/
Centers for Disease Control and Prevention website. (2005). Retrieved March 30, 2008 from http://www.cdc.gov/flu/cht/
Johns Hopkins Bloomberg website. (2008). Retrieved March 30, 2008 from http://www.jhsph.edu/flu
KidsHealth website. (2008). Retrieved March 30, 2008 from http://www.kidshealth.org/parent/general/sick/avian_flu.html
Nature website. (2008). Retrieved March 30, 2008 from http://www.nature.com/avianflu/index.html
Public Health News Center website. (2008). Retrieved March 30, 2008 from
http://www.jhsph.edu/flu
State of Delaware website. (2008). Retrieved March 30, 2008 from http://www.dhss.delaware.gov/dhss/dph/avianflu.html
US Travel State website. (2008). Retrieved March 30 , 2008 from
http://travel.state.gov/travel/tips/health/health_1181.html
VDH(Virginia Department of health) website. (2008). Retrieved March 30, 2008 from http://www.vdh.virginia.gov/PandemicFlu/AvianFlu.asp
yalegloba lwebsite. (2008). Retrieved March 30, 2008 from
http://yaleglobal.yale.edu/reports/avianflu.jsp

Thursday, March 13, 2008

Self Introduction Ver. 1

My name is Ristan, which I gave it to myself in my senior high school. Not long ago, I just escaped from the JCEE, getting into CGU, and now enjoying my freshman year. My extracurricular activity stands for my habits. I joined in tabletennis, tennis, and the choir. There is a singing contest lately, so we are having an intensive training. It almost takes all my leisure time away! However, it was just three weeks sinve I joined it. I should take more time practicing for fear of being everyone's barrier. Even I think so, the intensive training days really wore me out. Lots of setbacks and a sense of powerless really drive my crazy. But I will try my best. I am willing to give my voice if I can help the choir win the champion!